DEAD CITY SOULS STORY CHAPTER 4-6 ADDED

I have updated the next section of the story to the corresponding page. Hopefully everyone enjoys reading the next developing steps into the story and I ask everyone remember that it is telling the crew story as a whole and wont see many people featured until later on throughout but the majority of people get time in the story to develop their characters and see their rise to fame or fall from grace.

Around this time im currently 50 chapter into the story. Yes. 50 whole chapters telling the story and I've only just pretty much got to where I feel the third act/saga is truly beginning to take off in terms of finality and having the crew reach their final goals. I'll avoid spoilers as much as I can, and I ask for feedback from everyone ideally so I can write our story better overall.

The plot and progression is already set in stone and cannot be changed unfortunately due to how I've already written up the ending and just have to reach the point I'm happy to pull the trigger on it story wise. However, I will gladly accept feedback in a way that can see changes to backgrounds of characters and small events, my story is written in majority and I am not willing to change the flow of it for minor issues somebody may have. I have tried to be as fair and balanced as possible throughout the whole thing ensuring everyone has at least one moment to shine as an individual and amongst the team be it a huge story changing event or a minor move that plays into the grander scheme of things everyone has their moment and I have tried to make the most of peoples in game talents. However once again with this comes convulted storytelling issues because 16 people is much harder to write for the 4 and it then becomes a challenge of who to showcase and where but like I said I have tried my best to involve everyone for a positive moment along the way but a story requires primary characters that are surrounded by a rich supporting cast, then we have other people who show themselves just a few times but are involved in behind the scenes adventures told with exposition between the main characters as opposed to delving into several narrative paths.

Anyhow, I got carried away. Enjoy.

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